The Plastic Toy Shop
As I run into the plastic toy shop, I can see neon ducks, cars,
planes, trains and lots more toys shoved on the shelves. There are
all sorts of colours like green, blue, pink and lots more colours.
planes, trains and lots more toys shoved on the shelves. There are
all sorts of colours like green, blue, pink and lots more colours.
I can see two people on a computer. As they type I can hear the
noise of the computer keypad clicking. The two people look like
they are the owners of the plastic toy shop. They look like they
might be filling out the power bill. I look at the shelves, I am
annoyed because all of this plastic might end up in the ocean
and then the animals might eat it and die.
noise of the computer keypad clicking. The two people look like
they are the owners of the plastic toy shop. They look like they
might be filling out the power bill. I look at the shelves, I am
annoyed because all of this plastic might end up in the ocean
and then the animals might eat it and die.
Ki Ora Chloe my name is Jia from Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you are describing not telling. If you were in a real toy shop what would you like to buy? If you want to check out my blog go to http//:wpsjiam.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe, It's Anahera,
ReplyDeleteI like how you described what was around you. It's cool how you said you are annoyed about plastic going into the ocean. Maybe next time don't use I and Look so much and maybe you could add in some more descriptive words and make it a bit longer, as it was a bit short. Ka Pai Chloe.
-Anahera from Awahono School
Her is a link to my blog : https://awahonoanaherah.blogspot.com
:) <3 ;^