Hi Chloe it's Miro. I like your presentation about the Kakapo because you used a few interesting words like vegetation and precious. Maybe next time you could say claws instead of talons because talons make it sound like a killer.
kiora chloe, my name is kate and I go to papakura central school i like you post about the bird i have learnt a few things about the bird maybe next time you could describe the birds species
Hi Chloe it's Miro. I like your presentation about the Kakapo because you used a few interesting words like vegetation and precious. Maybe next time you could say claws instead of talons because talons make it sound like a killer.
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe, I like the background you've used and your choice of font colour and size, which makes your writing easy to read. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Miro thank you for the good comment.
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Idle thank you for the good comment.
ReplyDeletekiora chloe, my name is kate and I go to papakura central school i like you post about the bird i have learnt a few things about the bird maybe next time you could describe the birds species
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